Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Quinn's Digital Microscope Recount


This is a bit tricky to view because you have to click on each page separately and then the last word is left off BUT Quinn did a great job with this writing. He has a good introduction. He's written events in order with good sentence beginnings and he's included his own ideas to give the writing personal voice.


Anonymous said...

Well done Toby.Jessica.

Anonymous said...

I like your Writting Qinn.By Chantel.